June 28, 2016

Does Your Novel Have a Hook? by Andy Scheer

Don’t detour readers from your story. The first sentence told me the novelist was in trouble. The rest of the paragraph confirmed that. And the second […]
June 7, 2016

Birds or Binoculars? by Andy Scheer

Don’t waste a sentence’s key part. Today as I edited a manuscript for busy moms, I thought of birds and binoculars: Specifically, I thought of an […]